Andy "Derby" Derbak (jokerman05) wrote in dazeofanew,
Andy "Derby" Derbak
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Hey, long time no post. I've been bored and as co-songwriter for the band Optiqa, i decided i would get this thing up and running again. Same rules as before. Say what's on your mind. This time, it's not limited to poetry. Anything that has to do with society is acceptable. Anything you need understanding with can be put on here, with the exception of personal problems (unless put vaguely). A good example of this would be "How do i attract women" instead of "Why won't little miss Molly go out with me?". Anyways, i'm going to renew this whole community by starting it, once again, with a poem. Here it goes:

Looking into the mirror
Not sure what i see
there's an image in this place
but it's not looking back at me

And it's just another face-in-the-mirror
It's just a teenage wasteland
And it's one more thing i don't need
Why are we all here?
We all haste and
we have things we don't need

What's becomming of this place?
My fingers still feel
but i can't touch my face

It's just another thing we don't need
It's just a teenage wasteland

~Optiqa


now for my own freestyle:

Sinking deeper into my mind
i trip on lines and rhymes
that people of my kind
have never thought of before
and though we fall to floors
our minds are lifted beyond hours
and with my power
i will take everything that's sour
and transpose it into art
because within our hearts
is that willingness to tear apart
the things that make us hurt
and under my shirt
i hold a symbol of pride
a pride that some try to find
but they look too far
because that pride is in one place
that pride can only be found in the mind

i lost my flow at the end, but you know.. that's how it goes.

real deep poetry time!

I look at people as animals
beasts of behavior
sometimes controlled by substance
they call a savior
But deep down, they strive for primal things
things that cannot be touched
These things push them through the day
theses things they want too much

Can you see, can you believe
these beasts of possibilities
trying too hard for possesions
and in their daily confessions
they pray for more, more, more
without knowing their mind is walking out the door
driven insane by soicety!
Believe! devils of insanity

Their mind's eye closes
and their needs overthrow their heart
without realizing everything
that's deep down driveing them apart
Beasts overthrow their relationships
things that matter the most
leaving them deadly drawn to becomming
the last remainders of ghosts

Can you see, can you believe
these beasts of possibilities
trying too hard for possesions
and in their daily confessions
they pray for more, more, more
without knowing their mind is walking out the door
driven insane by soicety!
Believe! devils of insanity

Devils live deep inside you
Devils drive your inner sanctum
Devils live throughout you
and your greed feeds them
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